The Impact Study showed that improving obituaries is one of the most effective ways that newspapers can increase readership. Here are some examples of how this can be done. Click on the images in this gallery to view larger versions of them in a new window.

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The Modesto Bee
provides examples of many high-satisfaction practices. This complete
list of area deaths that appears on Page A2 as part of the news
roundup, is one such practice. Other newspapers include the death
list as part of the Page 1 index. |

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Publishing obituaries by region instead of alphabetical order is popular with readers in many areas. The Modesto Bee compromises by publishing the actual obituaries in alpha order, while providing this list of deaths by county on the same page. |

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The Modesto Bee leads every obituary
page with a longer "story obituary" about an ordinary
person, followed by shorter obituaries. Note the geographical list
of deaths in the upper right. |

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Note the Modesto Bee's tombstone-like practice
of including birth and death dates immediately under the name
of the deceased. Families who save obituaries like this. |

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The Atlanta Journal-Constitution
provides a free basic obituary to anyone born or living in Georgia,
arranged geographically, and writes two longer "story obituaries"
each day about interesting people. Obituary editor Kay Powell emphasizes
that "important does not necessarily equate to interesting." |

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Obituaries are "ordinary people" stories
in disguise. The best of them, like this one from the Point
Reyes Light in California, celebrate the deceased's life,
quirks and all. |

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Even the New York Times,
famous for its well-written obituaries of important persons, occasionally
includes extensive obituaries of ordinary people, such as this one. |

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Another example showing there are fascinating
stories to tell about the lives of quite ordinary people, this
one from the Chicago Tribune. |

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Another practice of high-satisfaction
newspapers is publishing a daily list of funerals in addition to
obituaries. This example is from the Johnstown, PA Tribune-Democrat. |

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Here's another example
from the Point Reyes Light that demonstrates how engaging
a colorful, warts-and-all portrait can be. |

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It doesn't take great
deeds to make a great person, as this obituary of a quite ordinary,
but kindly person in the Johnstown, PA, Tribune-Democrat
shows. |

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When an ordinary person touches a lot of lives,
it's often worth displaying the obituary on Page 1, as the Concord
Monitor did with this top-of-page story about the passing
of a local school librarian. |

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The Wilkes-Barre
Times Leader pays great attention to detail in the formatting
and typography of its obituaries, making them particularly attractive.
They are set in standard column width using standard body type,
and each leads off with a dropped-capital initial. Name of the deceased
and date of death are centered headlines above the text, creating
white space and a sense of airiness. The overall visual impact is
one of dignity and respect. |
Here's proof that the deceased doesn't have to be old, honored and famous to create a
compelling obituary that makes an emotional connection with the
reader. This obituary of a nine-month-old also clearly shows that
everyone does, indeed, have a story. The
ran this obituary on Page 1 above the fold. We show you the version
that ran on their Web site the same day.
finds interesting lives to write about for its featured daily obituary
by asking its readers to suggest the subjects. This feature, called
A Life Remembered, is presented as a celebration of the lives of
interesting people, so lifts the normal news stricture on timeliness.
The example here - the Web version - was published about two weeks after the death.
Each daily reminiscence concludes with contact information at the
for those interested in submitting names for consideration.